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[valon]

Amazing Grace bursts off the speakers, the soothing message of the lyrics sending the crowd INTO A FRENZY! A man wearing a priests attire slowly walks down to the ring, holding a bible in his hand. He reaches the end of the ramp and looks around sneering at the crowd, then suddenly hops into the ring and grabs a microphone.
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"Well well well, look who we have here..."
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The man speaks slowly with a strong Australian accent.
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"Seems we have a whole crowd of sinners who need to understand why I have come to this house of horror, this den of corruption!"
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The crowd scream boo's at the man standing in the ring who just stands staring intently at them.
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"Did that strike a chord of those who are not holy? Those who have decided to take a life of indecency over a life of contentment? It is your lies, your own mistakes which have led you to this! Have no fear though, I am here to rectify were others have failed. I am not a savior, no sir, my only savior is Jesus. I am simply a messenger of which can spread good into the world. Now who is with me?"
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The crowd continues to boo as the man in the ring looks down, head pointing at his feet. He now speaks slower and with a deeper tone.
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"I thought you might say that. You people... you always hated our kind. The populus could never be satisfied. Never. We just want to help you. Don't you understand? You have to act rebellious... have to act against what the lord wants. Just like my brother. You people... you sicken me. Your stench sends quivers down my spine. You will see what happens when the lord gives you an incredible gift. Each and every week I will dismantle someone in this very ring right before your eyes. Then you will understand. Then you will see the power I possess! I will be the shepard to guide the flock of the unworthy!"
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The crowd roars boo's as Amazing Grace kicks off again and Valon exits the ring with the camera fading out.

[kidhero]

Oh man that is a good RP for me to interupt
But unless you edit it to where you don't leave I can't.

[Machine]

you could always say "but before the camera fades Kid Heros music hits as he walks from backstage, confronting Valon with a mic in his hand" and the rest is up to you.

[kidhero]

Idk maybe. Valon what do you think?

[valon]

Yeah sure mate, I'm cool with it. Edit the end how you like, I'm happy for some cross section roleplaying right now.

[kidhero]

Amazing Grace bursts off the speakers, the soothing message of the lyrics sending the crowd INTO A FRENZY! A man wearing a priests attire slowly walks down to the ring, holding a bible in his hand. He reaches the end of the ramp and looks around sneering at the crowd, then suddenly hops into the ring and grabs a microphone.
-
"Well well well, look who we have here..."
-
The man speaks slowly with a strong Australian accent.
-
"Seems we have a whole crowd of sinners who need to understand why I have come to this house of horror, this den of corruption!"
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The crowd scream boo's at the man standing in the ring who just stands staring intently at them.
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"Did that strike a chord of those who are not holy? Those who have decided to take a life of indecency over a life of contentment? It is your lies, your own mistakes which have led you to this! Have no fear though, I am here to rectify were others have failed. I am not a savior, no sir, my only savior is Jesus. I am simply a messenger of which can spread good into the world. Now who is with me?"
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The crowd continues to boo as the man in the ring looks down, head pointing at his feet. He now speaks slower and with a deeper tone.
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"I thought you might say that. You people... you always hated our kind. The populus could never be satisfied. Never. We just want to help you. Don't you understand? You have to act rebellious... have to act against what the lord wants. Just like my brother. You people... you sicken me. Your stench sends quivers down my spine. You will see what happens when the lord gives you an incredible gift. Each and every week I will dismantle someone in this very ring right before your eyes. Then you will understand. Then you will see the power I possess! I will be the shepard to guide the flock of the unworthy!"

The crowd boos like crazy when suddenly the lights go out. Two figures appear on top of the titantron. A spotlight shows on the two figures and one is Kid Hero. The other one is dressed like Kid Hero but he is in an orange and yellow costume.

Kid Hero: You call these people unholy. You insult them and tell these people that they sicken you. You say you are not their hero. Well I am. And to me you are just another villain. These people are not the sinners...you are. And when I am through with you you will pay for you sins.

The lights go out again and Kid Hero and his sidekick are gone. The crowd cheers wildly after he is gone.

OOC: Feel free to edit this and interupt if you want Valon.

[valon]

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"Simple theatrics. You amuse me 'hero.' But when there is no heroes or villains when it comes to religion. There is simply god's will. And I will prove it to you... in due time. You will witness the full power of Valon Jones soon enough. Prepare my foe, for there is no force greater than mine. There is no border I will cross, no line to stop my vicious assault. I am no sinner and I am no saint... I am simply the messenger of GOD!"
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Amazing Grace hits once more as Valon exits the ring

[Machine]

nice RP

[kidhero]

Good job Valon we put together a pretty good rp overall

[Machine]

and Valon, I like what you have as a signature (the dog/hell comic) it's hillarious.

[Chris Dolan]

Good job Hero. A little tip, if you have people such as your sidekick. Try to make them more involved in the RP. Even if that means only a line or two of speach.

[kidhero]

Yeah im tryin to figure out a way to introduce him

[valon]

Woah Dolan doling out advice! (pun intended) times have changed from the old TBG days, Chris...

at lest u r spelling raightz now.

I still admired you though, you put up with all of that and stuck with it... and now you're way better. Gratz.

[Bloodbath]

killer go squeak squeak

[Machine]

there is no end to this guy's randomness, I'm not even kidding anymore