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Post by zeroblood7 on Aug 15, 2009 7:42:05 GMT -5
Ian Is Walking Backstage To His Lockeroom When He Suddenly Se A Masked Man Go Against Him With A Sledgehammer In His Hand. Ian Doesn't React Before The Makset Man Hits Him In The Head With The Sledgehammer.
IAN IS NOW BLEEDING!!
Now the masketman Dose A Stunner On Ian So That He Falls Hard Down On The Ground
Then the masketman Takes The Sledgehammer And Starting To Press It Hard On Ian's Head executing an devastating Dwf
The Masketman Takes Of His Mask And Now You Can Se That He Is ZeroBlood.
ZeroBlood keeps his Hard submission hold.
IAN IS NOW BUSTED WIDE OPEN!!!
ZeroBlood: Do You Accept My Challenge About A Last Man Standing Match Next Week On A Show?
Ian Screams: Yes!! Yes!! Just Break The Hold Please.
ZeroBlood Brakes The Hold And Ian Is Now Moving Away From ZeroBlood.
ZeroBlood: And Ian, If I Don't Get My Match You Will Have A Hard Time Here In MWA.
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Post by Skilled One on Aug 15, 2009 7:50:58 GMT -5
Godmode ftw.
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Post by The British Hero!!! on Aug 15, 2009 8:51:12 GMT -5
WOW! You could of just asked him. Just saying.
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Post by zeroblood7 on Aug 15, 2009 10:05:45 GMT -5
Polisch Guys Dont Do That!
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Post by Bloodbath on Aug 15, 2009 10:17:49 GMT -5
also, you should change it, cuz we know it's you before you reveal it's you, because you say zeroblood is attacking him, not a masked man
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Post by Legend. on Aug 15, 2009 10:27:59 GMT -5
god mod = bad.
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Post by Skilled One on Aug 15, 2009 10:28:06 GMT -5
Spell check.
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Post by Legend. on Aug 15, 2009 10:29:06 GMT -5
*looks at KJ*
When can I start tearing this RP apart? There is so much wrong here, but I want to wait to pick it apart piece by piece.
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Post by Skilled One on Aug 15, 2009 10:33:15 GMT -5
Dont look at me, i got a stomach bug. My mudkipz will have to be my legacy. You can go, i guess.
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Post by The Russian Wolf on Aug 15, 2009 10:50:04 GMT -5
i would have said yes if you would have asked. Just Looks Like i'll Need to RP Back Prehaps.
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Post by Skilled One on Aug 15, 2009 10:51:21 GMT -5
Wait. Legend rp advise? *ducks*
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Post by Legend. on Aug 15, 2009 11:03:56 GMT -5
*cracks knuckles*
1) You Don't Have To Caps Every Word, in fact, it's very annoying.
2) Spell check is your friend. "Dose" = "Does". Also, remember to use commas. YOUCANTHAVEARUNONSENETENCELIKETHISITSVERYANNOYING.
3) There is no such thing as a "Hard" submission hold. Just fyi.
4) God mods are bad! You aren't that great. The only way you could attack someone like that is if they are like 9 levels below you. Give him a chance to fight back.
5) Spell check is your friend.
6) 3 lines of text? Really? "Ohai der." "Hai." "Bye.". Pretty boring, no? Spice it up.
7) Have I mentioned that spell check is your friend yet?
8) What about god mods? Have I already said those are bad?
9) Spell check? Oh, I've already said it? I'll say it again. YOUR SPELLING SUCKS!
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Post by Skilled One on Aug 15, 2009 11:11:41 GMT -5
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You scared my mudkipz away. =(
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Post by The Russian Wolf on Aug 15, 2009 11:41:32 GMT -5
Please put this in the show (after the Numerous Edits of course)
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Post by Rod Lightning on Aug 15, 2009 11:49:56 GMT -5
Omg, epic RP fail.
K, there is a masked man attacking Ian.
Now zeroblood Dose A Stunner On Ian So That He Falls Hard Down On The Ground
Then ZeroBlood Takes The Sledgehammer And Starting To Press It Hard On Ian's Head executing an devastating Dwf
Masketman Takes Of His Mask And Now You Can Se That He Is ZeroBlood.
Don't you think its weird that you call yourself Zeroblood, and then you reveal yourself as TUM --- DUM --- TUUUUM...zeroblood...
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