Rise of a Hero

[kidhero]

Suddenly the lights in the arena go out. A red spotlight appears on top of the stage. Two men are seen, a man in a blue jumpsuit with a red cape and blue mask and a man in a orange jumpsuit with a yellow cape and an orange mask. The man in the blue suit pules a microphone to his mouth.

: In our world today, too many people are too willing to do anything to get what they want. These people are willing to hurt others, all for power. Others hurt people just to see them suffer. These others are people I like to call villains. The villains here in MWA will answer to me and my Saving Grace. Michael the Mangler, Chris Legend, I have seen the torture you put people through. Extreme Regime I know the pain others have felt because of you. All of you...all of you, the fans, and even some of the people backstage need help. You need a hero...maybe even a superhero. I am that man. I am MWA's Kid Hero.

Suddenly the spotlight goes out and the lights turn back on but the two men are gone.

[Chris Dolan]

Makings of a very good RP. Just a couple suggestions. 1)longer RP's 2)spellcheck, spellcheck is your friend

[kidhero]

Ok thanks for the tips all help and even criticism is appreciated.

[kidhero]

Edited thank you Chris Dolan

[Skilled One]

Good job.

[kidhero]

Thanks

[originalb]

I like it... it could be very good between two matches, do it twice and than enter with it into a match or and interview...

that would remind me of the "save_us"-Jericho comeback

[kidhero]

Thanks and I like that idea.