Never forgiven

[radical]

(Radical is back stage ready for his tag match suddenly King Slushy appaers)

KS:"Ok listen Rad I know we are not the best friends, I know how on NZ we fought and.... ok heres the thing we have been drafted to MWA now its diffrent from what we did on NZ"

Rad:"WHAT WE DID! more like what you did what happened to you, you were my best friend why did you betray me, betray all our friends in NZ I mean my home town and you run me over with a car i will never forgive you "

(Rad walks away)

KS:"I know"

(Cam fades)

[radical]

KK what about feed back on this

[brandonripley]

First big thing is that you can't use other federation names. That means bringing up the IWA is a big no-no. However this does not prevent you from bringing you you guys had a past with each other in another location, you just can't bring up the location itself. You could say something like "Why did you betray me back in Oklahoma?" but you can't say "Why did you betray me back in the IWA?" You also cannot mention any other wrestler names unless they already belong to the MWA. I know when Ritter reads this he would be saying the same exact thing about this, because it's against the rules of The Wrestling Game.

But other than that, you got a run-on sentence on KS's first line of dialogue, other than that it's a good start though.

[radical]

Thank you

[Ritter]

Mar 1, 2009 5:21:37 GMT -5 @brandonripley said:

However this does not prevent you from bringing you you guys had a past with each other in another location, you just can't bring up the location itself. You could say something like "Why did you betray me back in Oklahoma?" but you can't say "Why did you betray me back in the IWA?"

Yeah, good idea. I like that you guys already have some history. Should be a good match!

[radical]

thanks