The Ultimate... Bloodbath?

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foley looks demented here lol

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The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 10, 2009 15:40:57 GMT -5

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Post by Bloodbath on Sept 10, 2009 15:40:57 GMT -5

The scene starts with sara sanderson Backstage with The Ultimate Killer.

Sara- So Killer-

Killer- Shut up sara. Killer is dead. Tonight, he starts a whole new life as Bloodbath.

Sara- Ok so, uh, Bloodbath? We saw your former self, as we assume, kill and bury your sister. And you killed your brother?

Bloodbath- No, The Ultimate Killer killed them. Now he himself is dead. With his sister and brother. And guess who ended his miserable life? Me, Bloodbath. And the freak couldn't hold that Hardcore Title for even 4 defenses. So, I'll redeem him. I'm challenging the hardcore champion to a Falls Count Anywhere Match, for the title of course

Sara- well there you have it! Bloodbath is challenging for the Hardcore Title!

Last Edit: Sept 25, 2009 11:08:01 GMT -5 by Ritter

prepare to be killed

the first ever MWA hardcore champion!(3 time champ)

former tag team champ(1 time, Alexander Ritter)

eeeeeeeeeexxxxxxtttttttrrrrrreeeeeeemmmmmmmmeeeeeee!

Skilled One High Mid-Card Do you know the word? Posts: 1,719	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 10, 2009 15:56:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Skilled One on Sept 10, 2009 15:56:18 GMT -5 Kinda short.
	Waka waka waka.

Bloodbath High Mid-Card foley looks demented here lol Posts: 1,304	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 11, 2009 6:48:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bloodbath on Sept 11, 2009 6:48:11 GMT -5 I know! my friend let me use his comp to write it and was still short
	prepare to be killed the first ever MWA hardcore champion!(3 time champ) former tag team champ(1 time, Alexander Ritter) eeeeeeeeeexxxxxxtttttttrrrrrreeeeeeemmmmmmmmeeeeeee!

The British Hero!!! Front Office !!!VIVI IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN CHUCK NORRIS!!! Posts: 1,370	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 11, 2009 10:11:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 11, 2009 10:11:46 GMT -5 Can i add to it. Seeing i'm Ian's ally
	Your 2 time hardcore champion! And former tag champ! Hear me and obey!

Bloodbath High Mid-Card foley looks demented here lol Posts: 1,304	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 13, 2009 0:05:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bloodbath on Sept 13, 2009 0:05:20 GMT -5 sure
	prepare to be killed the first ever MWA hardcore champion!(3 time champ) former tag team champ(1 time, Alexander Ritter) eeeeeeeeeexxxxxxtttttttrrrrrreeeeeeemmmmmmmmeeeeeee!

The British Hero!!! Front Office !!!VIVI IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN CHUCK NORRIS!!! Posts: 1,370	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 13, 2009 4:03:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 13, 2009 4:03:32 GMT -5 wait, is this for monday or Thursday?
	Your 2 time hardcore champion! And former tag champ! Hear me and obey!

Bloodbath High Mid-Card foley looks demented here lol Posts: 1,304	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 13, 2009 16:50:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bloodbath on Sept 13, 2009 16:50:06 GMT -5 eh, first show it fits on
	prepare to be killed the first ever MWA hardcore champion!(3 time champ) former tag team champ(1 time, Alexander Ritter) eeeeeeeeeexxxxxxtttttttrrrrrreeeeeeemmmmmmmmeeeeeee!

The British Hero!!! Front Office !!!VIVI IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN CHUCK NORRIS!!! Posts: 1,370	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 14, 2009 12:33:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 14, 2009 12:33:42 GMT -5 I can't realy add to it then because ian joins the empire on Thursday. Still its a good rp but it is kinda short.
	Your 2 time hardcore champion! And former tag champ! Hear me and obey!

Skilled One High Mid-Card Do you know the word? Posts: 1,719	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 14, 2009 14:12:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Skilled One on Sept 14, 2009 14:12:34 GMT -5 way short. Killer, try to add details or stuff to make them longer. Way longer. Not three paragraphs..
	Waka waka waka.

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The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 18, 2009 13:30:07 GMT -5

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Post by Ritter on Sept 18, 2009 13:30:07 GMT -5

*I* don't see a problem with it being short. If that's all it takes to tell the story, then that's all it takes to tell the story and get the point across. 3 sentences, 3 paragraphs, 3 pages, it doesn't matter to me. And techanicayl if you add it up with the other parts that came before it..

The X Low Mid-Card Posts: 168	The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 18, 2009 15:16:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The X on Sept 18, 2009 15:16:26 GMT -5 The high fiving white guys are elitists. They've always got somethin to say about everybody else. Hopefully, The X was never as bad as them.

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The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 19, 2009 2:25:25 GMT -5

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Post by Ritter on Sept 19, 2009 2:25:25 GMT -5

Ok, I don't want what I said to come off wrong.. there is nothing wrong with giving someone tips, or advice, or want to help someone improve at something.. I was just saying that whatever people do do (dodo?) so OK by me. Sometimes you don't have to write a novel to push forward a storypoint. I just didn't want it to sound like I was telling people to not want to help out or something.

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The Ultimate... Bloodbath? Sept 19, 2009 14:21:37 GMT -5

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Sept 18, 2009 15:16:26 GMT -5 The X said:

The high fiving white guys are elitists. They've always got somethin to say about everybody else. Hopefully, The X was never as bad as them.

*high fives KJ* Wait what was that X? xD

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The Ultimate... Bloodbath?

Post by Bloodbath on Sept 10, 2009 15:40:57 GMT -5

Post by Skilled One on Sept 10, 2009 15:56:18 GMT -5

Post by Bloodbath on Sept 11, 2009 6:48:11 GMT -5

Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 11, 2009 10:11:46 GMT -5

Post by Bloodbath on Sept 13, 2009 0:05:20 GMT -5

Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 13, 2009 4:03:32 GMT -5

Post by Bloodbath on Sept 13, 2009 16:50:06 GMT -5

Post by The British Hero!!! on Sept 14, 2009 12:33:42 GMT -5

Post by Skilled One on Sept 14, 2009 14:12:34 GMT -5

Post by Ritter on Sept 18, 2009 13:30:07 GMT -5

Post by The X on Sept 18, 2009 15:16:26 GMT -5

Post by Ritter on Sept 19, 2009 2:25:25 GMT -5

Post by Chris Dolan on Sept 19, 2009 14:21:37 GMT -5

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