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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Oct 29, 2009 1:16:50 GMT -5
"Tech runs to the ring throwin out stealen jewelry and slides into the ring" Tech9:I heard rumors of an old vs new fight in the back & that got me thinkin wuldnt it b fun if i got in on dat. "the crowd luvz dat idea and starts cheering "make the match" "Gm Hunter makes his way into the ring arrogently" J.J. Hunter: Now there is no way in hell, heaven, purgatory or earth dat im gunna let chu get in a main event match like that newbie! "the crowd starts boeing at the gm" "Tech9 walks toward him pullin out a be-be gun" Tech9:who said anything about main event "Gm J.J.'s face turns red" J.J.: ok but who u challenging Tech9: whatever original wantz 2 fight me "Tech9 drops the mic leaves"
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Post by The British Hero!!! on Oct 29, 2009 8:31:04 GMT -5
Its Ok. But you should put a space between each person talking. like this...
"Tech runs to the ring throwin out stealen jewelry and slides into the ring"
Tech9:I heard rumors of an old vs new fight in the back & that got me thinkin wuldnt it b fun if i got in on dat.
"the crowd luvz dat idea and starts cheering "make the match"
"Gm Hunter makes his way into the ring arrogently"
J.J. Hunter: Now there is no way in hell, heaven, purgatory or earth dat im gunna let chu get in a main event match like that newbie!
"the crowd starts boeing at the gm"
"Tech9 walks toward him pullin out a be-be gun"
Tech9:who said anything about main event
"Gm J.J.'s face turns red"
J.J.: ok but who u challenging
Tech9: whatever original wantz 2 fight me
"Tech9 drops the mic leaves"
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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Oct 29, 2009 8:41:50 GMT -5
thx 4 the advice im a newbie to rpin
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Post by "Finlander" Leka on Oct 29, 2009 14:06:42 GMT -5
You can do RP like this. More colours and everyone understand who is talking. --
"Tech runs to the ring throwin out stealen jewelry and slides into the ring"
Tech9:I heard rumors of an old vs new fight in the back & that got me thinkin wuldnt it b fun if i got in on dat.
"the crowd luvz dat idea and starts cheering "make the match"
"Gm Hunter makes his way into the ring arrogently"
J.J. Hunter: Now there is no way in hell, heaven, purgatory or earth dat im gunna let chu get in a main event match like that newbie!
"the crowd starts boeing at the gm"
"Tech9 walks toward him pullin out a be-be gun"
Tech9:who said anything about main event
"Gm J.J.'s face turns red"
J.J.: ok but who u challenging
Tech9: whatever original wantz 2 fight me
"Tech9 drops the mic leaves"
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Post by Rod Lightning on Oct 29, 2009 16:36:57 GMT -5
Now, lots of guys made this "mistake" really, its not supposed to be OLD VS NEW. "falco fusion quote: And for now I'm clearly staying away from the fact it's Originals vs. New Blood. I don't think it's needed to be explained, so long as WE all know it's happening. "
See?
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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Oct 29, 2009 17:27:08 GMT -5
Oh but i wanna do a cool promo u ruined it partially "shooots him in his toe"
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Post by War Wolf on Oct 30, 2009 17:45:59 GMT -5
again, so rude...
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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Nov 1, 2009 16:27:18 GMT -5
im a g
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Post by War Wolf on Nov 1, 2009 22:21:42 GMT -5
im a 7th letter
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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Nov 2, 2009 17:10:20 GMT -5
i am 2
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Post by War Wolf on Nov 2, 2009 19:36:14 GMT -5
ur a b?
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Post by Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!! on Nov 3, 2009 15:45:38 GMT -5
yo mama
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Post by War Wolf on Nov 3, 2009 19:25:34 GMT -5
by 2, did u mean "also" i thought u meant ur a 2nd letter, so ur a 7th letter huh. im not, i just like saying that
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Post by War Wolf on Nov 3, 2009 19:25:59 GMT -5
and yo mama
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Post by Skilled One on Nov 3, 2009 20:59:03 GMT -5
How do you throw out "stealin" jewelry? Way 2 go. You use a transalation site or something?
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