wolf Brothers (9 Nov)

[Wolf Masters]

This is my first try to Rp.




Smoke appears at the enterance , and the enterance clip of wolf masters appears on the screen with the theme song of powerman 5000.

(Wolf Masters Walks down the to the ring with a mic)

(He gets in the center of the ring and howls loadly(crowd cheers)!)

Wolf Masters: I know that I haven't introduced my self when I joined the MWA

Wolf Masters: But that doesn't matter anymore cause today the MWA has a special new member on the roster
and his name is Lone Wolf

(Wolf Masters smile's)

Wolf Masters:you know whats so special about this new member of the roster well..

(Wold masters is still for a few sec)

Wolf Masters: Well he's my brother!

(Crowd cheers!)

Wolf Masters: OK enough talking lets welcome my brother !

(Lone Wolf comes out and goes the ring and then shaking his brothers hand,Wolf masters gives his brother the mic)

Lone Wolf: It is an honour to be a part of MWA roster

(crowd starts cheering!)

Lone Wolf: I am looking forward on all the matches that are going to come

Wolf Masters: I know bro,together we will get to the top of the roster and become champions!

Lone Wolf: yes brother, together we will earn our future titles!

Wolf Masters: We will dominate and destroy everything that gets in our way!

(Crowd Cheers!)
(Wolf Masters drops the mic and leaves the ring with Lone wolf)

[Rod Lightning]

Keep it up, not bad for your first try, not bad at all.

[Wolf Masters]

Thx

[theheartbreaker]

Good job. Ain't too shabby but if I were to suggest anything I say try to show more of what's happening. When the crowd cheers are they 'deafening' or are they making the stadium tremble. What are they saying, are screaming M! W! A! or howling? I'd also try to find something visual that separates your wrestle and focus on that. If he has a lot of hair use it to cover his eyes, or have him move it out of his face when plotting how to respond to something.

[War Wolf]

good one

[Wolf Masters]

Thx for your advise Heartbreaker

[Machine]

for your first RP, that was very good