Pranked

[Tech AKA FREAKNIK!!!!]

*Tech and his new assistant aleah flowers walk into alli's room*

Tech: You got the stuff set up aleah?

Aleah: Yes techy-boo

Tech:(whispers) I told you not to call me that at work

Tim:(daves cousin) Im pretty sure everone can hear you

Tech: Wait we're on air all ready?

Tim: yeah you didnt me say 1,2,3 rolling... oh wait you ms.Flowers were toungue kissing in the locker room then.

Tech: shut up and wait 4 it!

*Alli walks out of the bathroom in nothing but a towel*

Tech: Hey alli how you doin have you met my assistant aleah

Alli: No i haven't, its a pleasure to meet you

Aleah: Thanks it's also a pleasure to meet you. Im finally glad to see a girl taking it to the men in this buisness.

Alli: Thanks i try my best.

Tech: (silently says) 5,4,3,2,1. PUSH THE BUTTON!

*tim pushes the button letting champagne on both girls*

Aleah: what the hell you said you weren't gona spill it on me

Tech: i also said i was gonna still red paint, but it was actually champagne. Now you 2 are all wet and ya gotta get undressed

Aleah & Alli: You jerk! Im gunna kill you!

*Tim and Tech run out the door and closes it locking them inside*

Tech: Sorry aleah baby..... I mean maybe next time you'll think 2 steps ahead of me!

*Tim tuns off the camera*

[Rod Lightning]

lol!

And damm Alli, you shower A LOT.

[lone wolf]

LMAO ROD xD!

[The British Hero!!!]

Its good but they're are obvious mistakes in this like using 4 instead of for.

(can anyone find the mistake in this sentence? 1 mark available)

[machosteele]

Dec 8, 2009 11:25:58 GMT -5 The British Hero!!! said:

Its good but they're are obvious mistakes in this like using 4 instead of for.

(can anyone find the mistake in this sentence? 1 mark available)

They’re is a contraction of they are. you don't need the extra are.

What do I win? ;D

[The British Hero!!!]

Well done Macho!

I also would of accepted: It should be there are.