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Post by Bloodbath on Jun 15, 2009 14:23:56 GMT -5
jj and charlotte hunter come to the ring.
jj: you all saw what happened to killer last week.we have no updates, except that they have n clue whats going on.
charlotte: and if he isn't able to defend his title, the winner of the mason vs. zeroblood match will be declared champion.
she has a sad look on here face.
jj: oh boo hoo, you're man is gonna lose his title.
charlotte: jj, you just pushed it too far. im suck of this. I QU-
suddenly wait and bleed by slipknot starts playing, but killer doesn't come out
justin cole:well, thats killers theme.
garret rogers: so where is he?
wait and bleed quits and this cold black by slipknot starts playing.
garret rogers: another slipknot song?
killer jumps the wall and comes into the ring. charlotte notices, but jj doesn't. charlotte taps on jj's shoulder. he turns around and see's killer, his arm around charlotte.killer gives a thumbs up, and the ring collapses! killer doesn't even stumble, while the hunters fall. killer helps charlotte up, and they leave whats left of the ring together, the whole crowd in silence
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Post by Bloodbath on Jun 15, 2009 14:55:54 GMT -5
feedback anyone
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Post by Legend. on Jun 15, 2009 14:57:26 GMT -5
It's good, just fix some of the spelling errors.
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Post by Bloodbath on Jun 15, 2009 14:58:02 GMT -5
ok
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Post by Chris Dolan on Jun 15, 2009 14:59:14 GMT -5
spelling errors kill. Trust me, I would know xP
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Post by Legend. on Jun 15, 2009 15:00:51 GMT -5
And who taught Dolan?
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Post by Bloodbath on Jun 15, 2009 15:01:52 GMT -5
ok i fixed them. sorry, my keyboard is screwed up
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